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Fic: A Measure of Relief

Title: A Measure of Relief
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: NC-17
Warnings:  oral, PWP...srsly, the most PWP thing I have ever written
Spoilers: none
Word Count: ~ 800
Author notes: Evil porn plot bunny, didn't want to let go. Written for deancaskink, link to prompt at the bottom because LJ is fucking with me big time.

A Measure of Relief


The air in the room is hot, almost solid with the humidity and heat of summer nighttime. The old air conditioning whirrs and chirps, making more noise than doing any real work. Dean can feel droplets of sweat rolling slowly down his back, sometimes dripping down on the stale carpet, sometimes rolling into the crack of his ass and tickling. It doesn’t matter; it’s not enough to break his focus. All he cares about is the smooth glide of Cas against his lips, the salty bursts of precome sliding down his tongue, the minute vibrations he feels as his hands press Cas’ hips against the wall, the only tell of the angel’s effort to keep it soft and gentle. In every quiver, he can feel Cas’ desire to ram his cock down his throat, and Dean secretly revels in it. He feels almighty and empowered, because with his human mouth, with his tongue and teeth and hands he can reduce an Angel of the Lord to a trembling, whimpering mess. He doesn’t care about blasphemy and getting struck with divine wrath. God is gone and doesn’t care, so Dean can deprave his own personal angel as much as he pleases, and fuck, does he please. Every moan, every broken utter of his name that tears off from Cas’ lips fuels the fire burning low in Dean’s belly. He is hot, incandescent with love and adoration and the need to show Cas every single small thing that can bring him pleasure and wring all those obscene and beautiful sounds from his mouth.

Dean swivels his tongue in a figure eight and scrapes his teeth lightly, oh so lightly on the sensitive cluster of nerves below the head; Cas rewards him with a choked off cry and his hands settle on Dean’s head, slow, gentle, petting, not tugging, and for a moment Dean needs it to be rough, and violent, Cas’ fingers twisting his hair, forcing him to stay while that thick red cock shoves deep and hard with no mercy. Cas, however, has other ideas. His hands just rake through Dean’s hair, never tugging hard enough to hurt, just tracing the shape of his skull, taking detours to dip in the hollow of his neck and to hook behind his ears. As Dean takes Cas deeper, trying not to gag and to keep his tongue moving, Cas’ hands migrate to his face, slowly stroking his brow as if he was a feverish child. As Dean works his head back and forth, corkscrewing slightly and cataloguing every moan and twitch, those hands continue their gentle journey, as if unaffected by the frenzy of lust that consumes their owner. Even as Cas throws his head back and finally allows himself to thrust shallowly, his fingers wrap around Dean’s jaw from both sides and his thumbs lightly massage his jaw hinge, feeling the subtle movement and taking away some of the tension from the repetitive movements. One of those thumbs slides lower to his cheek and Dean turns his head, allowing Cas to feel his cock moving in Dean’s mouth; a high-pitched keen is all the warning Dean gets before Cas loses it completely and starts thrusting for real, sliding down Dean’s throat. His hand wraps lightly against Dean’s windpipe and feels the muscle contracting around his cock and that’s it, Cas is slamming his head back into the wall with a force that would concuss a human being and emptying his load down Dean’s gullet, moaning and uttering words no angel should ever have a reason to say. Dean swallows around the twitching cock lodged in his throat and feels Castiel’s hands moving to trace his lips where they are still stretched, a bit of come dribbling from the corner. He can feel the scent of Cas’ come seeping into his skin and he has some perverse liking for the feeling that he will be able to taste and smell him hours after he’s gone, another reminder besides the ache in his neck and the rasp in his voice.

Finally, Cas pulls his softening cock out of Dean’s mouth and slides down gracefully to his own knees to kiss his taste from Dean’s lips. Tongues tangle in a filthy dance that drips with saliva, semen, love and desperation. Dean’s own cock is throbbing almost painfully in his jeans, but he resists the urge to touch himself. He knows Cas will take care of him; they take care of each other in whatever fucked-up way the world allows them, and it has to be enough. It is more than either of them has ever had, and if God has any opposition to a fallen human and a fallen angel taking pleasure in each other’s flesh, he can go fuck himself. They might go down burning, but they will go together.


Written for this prompt  at deancaskink

Comments

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isasminion
Sep. 13th, 2011 12:02 pm (UTC)
Wow. That was incredibly hot!
I feel like you summed up their relationship *and* threw in brain-melting porn at the same time - and all in just 800 words.
It says so much more than you'd normally find in a PWP, and your descriptions are really vivid. (I almost winced myself when Cas threw his head back against the wall, lol - and that kiss... *dies*)
Awesome work :)
nightflyer42
Sep. 13th, 2011 09:08 pm (UTC)
I'm so happy that you liked it! :) I'm always worried about the quality of the porn I write, which is why I rarely (never) post it... I try to go for more that "insert tab A into slot B", Im glad you think I managed!
isasminion
Sep. 14th, 2011 08:30 am (UTC)
You more than managed :)
It's a big thing to post something you've written, hard to gather the courage, y'know? But you don't need to worry at all, it's fantastic :)
signalfire
Sep. 13th, 2011 05:47 pm (UTC)
It was so short but every single word packed such a punch, every description was perfect. It's beautiful and really, really dirty all at the same time and I'm putting it in my favourites for later :-)
nightflyer42
Sep. 13th, 2011 09:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks! I was going for the beautiful and dirty angle... :)
joyyjpg
Sep. 13th, 2011 08:12 pm (UTC)
Oh my god, this is gorgeous. How you managed to say so much with just a few words is beyond me.

Even as Cas throws his head back and finally allows himself to thrust shallowly, his fingers wrap around Dean’s jaw from both sides and his thumbs lightly massage his jaw hinge, feeling the subtle movement and taking away some of the tension from the repetitive movements. One of those thumbs slides lower to his cheek and Dean turns his head, allowing Cas to feel his cock moving in Dean’s mouth; a high-pitched keen is all the warning Dean gets before Cas loses it completely and starts thrusting for real, sliding down Dean’s throat.
OMGGGGG, yes. That's it exactly. (That was totally my prompt, btw. *waves*) I also loved the bit before that with Cas stroking Dean's brow, gah. Dying.

Also, the end slays me, especially He knows Cas will take care of him; they take care of each other in whatever fucked-up way the world allows them, and it has to be enough. and They might go down burning, but they will go together. That is a million kinds of perfect and love it. LOVVEEEE IT.
nightflyer42
Sep. 13th, 2011 09:17 pm (UTC)
Yay, you liked it! Awesome prompt, I just couldn't get it out of my head and kept going back to it. I'm really happy that I you enjoy it so much! *blushes*
alyssia333
Sep. 14th, 2011 11:00 am (UTC)
luvs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~brain explodes~

hot hot hot
nightflyer42
Sep. 15th, 2011 08:50 am (UTC)
*collects brain carefully and hands it back* I'm glad you liked it! :)
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nightflyer42
Sep. 15th, 2011 08:52 am (UTC)
Thanks! *blushes* I aim to please...
jem_018
Sep. 14th, 2011 05:30 pm (UTC)
oh wow. This was really hot. *fans self*

He knows Cas will take care of him; they take care of each other in whatever fucked-up way the world allows them, and it has to be enough. It is more than either of them has ever had, and if God has any opposition to a fallen human and a fallen angel taking pleasure in each other’s flesh, he can go fuck himself. They might go down burning, but they will go together.
and this part. oh gosh. I love it. ♥♥♥
nightflyer42
Sep. 15th, 2011 08:55 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you like it, I'm kinda proud of that part myself...
rinji_ryu
Sep. 15th, 2011 05:46 am (UTC)
That was just amazing! Especially the last several lines!
nightflyer42
Sep. 15th, 2011 08:56 am (UTC)
Thank you! :)
melalucci
Sep. 15th, 2011 06:36 am (UTC)
Awesome. :) Hot and romantic, my favorite.
nightflyer42
Sep. 15th, 2011 08:57 am (UTC)
Thanks! Yeah, romance somehow crept into my porn while I wasn't looking... :D
angel_kink
Sep. 15th, 2011 07:24 am (UTC)
HNNNNNNNNNG YES
nightflyer42
Sep. 15th, 2011 08:59 am (UTC)
Thanks! :)
laraneia
Sep. 15th, 2011 10:11 am (UTC)
That was the most beautifully written blowjob I have ever read! *applauds* Simply lovely :)
cedelede
Sep. 15th, 2011 02:44 pm (UTC)
Guh.

You have reduced me to a brainless mess. But somehow I'm okay with that.

The juxtaposition of Cas throwing his head back against the wall with the gentleness of his hands against Dean's face? Too beautiful and hot for words.
zatnikatel
Sep. 16th, 2011 02:18 am (UTC)
Hey, what a gorgeous fic. There's something really visceral about it but it's incredibly intimate and gentle too. You really convey the care they have for each other so beautifully. Some fics you read and it feels almost like you're sorta spying on them in the act, it's that affecting. This is definitely one of them, so thank you so much for sharing!
cherazz
Sep. 17th, 2011 02:10 am (UTC)
You are a GOD -bows- I have so much love for this fic! It shatters most BJ fics I've read. So damn good; yummy; delicious...GUH! My brain is malfunctioning. Dean and those wonderful cock-sucking lips }:D

His hands just rake through Dean’s hair, never tugging hard enough to hurt, just tracing the shape of his skull, taking detours to dip in the hollow of his neck and to hook behind his ears.
- Love that image! So sensual and loving. I just about squee'd :)

-memes-
esonador
Oct. 3rd, 2011 09:03 pm (UTC)
This was fucking delicious *lady boner*

I also adore your way of writing, Dean and his "we are going to hell together" *melting*
catherine71548
Nov. 16th, 2016 08:13 pm (UTC)
oral PWPsrsly the most PWP thing I have ever written
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